tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post3188321959803677226..comments2023-03-29T06:53:23.932-07:00Comments on Kimberly Hutmacher Writes: Poetry Friday: Poem Under DeconstructionKimberly Hutmacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-67786613285258108382019-01-31T09:13:20.847-08:002019-01-31T09:13:20.847-08:00Very helpful analysis--thank you! I also love Mary...Very helpful analysis--thank you! I also love Mary Ann Hoberman's "Fish" and use it in my poetry workshops. I also find myself writing about weather a lot--endless inspiration!JoAnn Early Mackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09823683173219671001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-8711531921355390622019-01-28T04:35:33.564-08:002019-01-28T04:35:33.564-08:00Oh wow! I love Mary Ann Hoberman, and this would b...Oh wow! I love Mary Ann Hoberman, and this would be a perfect pairing for a lesson on Onomatopeia. Thank you for stopping by and sharing this little treasure with me.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-62258276617997058502019-01-28T04:33:26.394-08:002019-01-28T04:33:26.394-08:00Thank you, Kay! I think 'poetic scary' is ...Thank you, Kay! I think 'poetic scary' is what I felt when I was being taught poetry in middle school. It wasn't until I was an adult that I learned to truly enjoy poetry and found a good mentor to help me figure out its ins and outs. It feels good to know that I'm successfully taking the scary out. Thanks for stopping by!Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-24026291007421300072019-01-27T19:30:33.556-08:002019-01-27T19:30:33.556-08:00This reminds me of a really great fish poem by Mar...This reminds me of a really great fish poem by Mary Ann Hoberman, full of sounds and action. I think you might like it too! http://myjuicylittleuniverse.blogspot.com/2011/09/growing-gills.htmlHeidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-11774425374116141662019-01-27T16:01:56.179-08:002019-01-27T16:01:56.179-08:00My first thought was what a fun poem! Then your de...My first thought was what a fun poem! Then your deconstruction explains why in a way that is relatable and not at all poetic scary. I do love the word and sound play with the rhyme, repetition and onomatopoeia. Then the questions at the end give more to think about. Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08210045352610490115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-10045705878106975842019-01-27T07:06:11.753-08:002019-01-27T07:06:11.753-08:00I will. And, I'm linking to this post in my lo...I will. And, I'm linking to this post in my look at Aileen Fisher. I think it will be next weekend, Feb 1st....unless something else poet-y comes up. Linda Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00833034575304594924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-71938771415290300582019-01-27T05:59:08.695-08:002019-01-27T05:59:08.695-08:00Thanks, Ruth. That's exactly what I thought.Thanks, Ruth. That's exactly what I thought.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-6405570101856324562019-01-27T05:58:44.795-08:002019-01-27T05:58:44.795-08:00So glad that you enjoyed it and that you plan to u...So glad that you enjoyed it and that you plan to use it with your class. I hope you'll share some of their creations from using it as a mentor text.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-22219274838402132032019-01-26T16:53:49.819-08:002019-01-26T16:53:49.819-08:00I absolutely adore this poem, Kimberly! I think it...I absolutely adore this poem, Kimberly! I think it will be perfect to share with my Kindergarten poets. Our curriculum, including weather, is year-round rather than unit after unit. I think this would make the perfect mentor text for us to craft our own. Many, many thanks, and happy Poetry Friday! Christie Wymanhttps://wonderingandwondering.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-52089365373112662852019-01-26T13:37:02.973-08:002019-01-26T13:37:02.973-08:00Fun! It would definitely be a great one to use whe...Fun! It would definitely be a great one to use when teaching onomatopoeia! Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-43004352126299412072019-01-26T13:36:09.790-08:002019-01-26T13:36:09.790-08:00Glad to hear you enjoyed it, Michelle. Thanks for ...Glad to hear you enjoyed it, Michelle. Thanks for stopping by.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-63866171581574691552019-01-26T12:27:19.757-08:002019-01-26T12:27:19.757-08:00Delightful and rich pome Kimberly. I love how the ...Delightful and rich pome Kimberly. I love how the quick rhythm pulls us down to the bottom and twists back at us at the end. I'm constantly writing about the weather too and it's relationship to nature, thanks for the deconstruction too!Michelle Koganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02575814872372518994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-74708268167880436122019-01-26T06:41:56.728-08:002019-01-26T06:41:56.728-08:00So glad this post could help with the contest! Ail...So glad this post could help with the contest! Aileen Fisher is a poetic treasure. I hope you'll shar esome of your work from using her poems as mentor text. Thanks for stopping by!Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-41961943961950611752019-01-26T06:40:09.123-08:002019-01-26T06:40:09.123-08:00Thanks for stopping by, Carol. I'm heading ove...Thanks for stopping by, Carol. I'm heading over to read your post righ now.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-30397230402959632042019-01-26T06:39:38.123-08:002019-01-26T06:39:38.123-08:00Agreed Alan. I love reading poetry just for the pu...Agreed Alan. I love reading poetry just for the pure enjoyment, but if we're going to write it, I think we need to know how the poets built the beautiful poems we love to read.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-44198329845343137182019-01-26T06:37:45.170-08:002019-01-26T06:37:45.170-08:00I love the term 'unpacking", Mary Lee. Th...I love the term 'unpacking", Mary Lee. Thanks for stopping by :)Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-61672921188073892552019-01-26T06:37:00.922-08:002019-01-26T06:37:00.922-08:00Thank you, Molly.Thank you, Molly.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481478199892532599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-49276477266531345672019-01-26T06:09:58.154-08:002019-01-26T06:09:58.154-08:00I'm so glad you shared your deconstruction of ...I'm so glad you shared your deconstruction of this poem! It's a great example to share with students. And what a fun poem! I don't often write about weather, but your post is nudging me to return to a poem I wrote last week during the much hyped snowstorm. Thanks again for sharing!Molly Hoganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16975100905434379155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-53716411679708113022019-01-26T05:17:32.146-08:002019-01-26T05:17:32.146-08:00I love to share real-life examples of someone &quo...I love to share real-life examples of someone "unpacking" a poem! I'll definitely share this with my students!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-26610275150875229042019-01-25T18:50:00.498-08:002019-01-25T18:50:00.498-08:00Kat Apel referred to your post after reading my Po...Kat Apel referred to your post after reading my Poetry Friday offering called "Gray-Day Pondering." She commented, "It (my poem) links in well with Kimberly's poem deconstruction post, too." I really like how you noticed and wondered to give readers new insight into the poem you took to deconstruct. My post is at http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2019/01/gray-day-pondering.html. I would love to hear your comments.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-44301051909747767302019-01-25T18:25:25.024-08:002019-01-25T18:25:25.024-08:00Thank-you! 😊Thank-you! 😊KatApel - katswhiskers.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01297639228969549518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-3574706790317629222019-01-25T17:26:55.531-08:002019-01-25T17:26:55.531-08:00Weather is a compelling subject Kimberly. We frequ...Weather is a compelling subject Kimberly. We frequently discuss despite our total inability to do anything about it. I too enjoy it as an inspiration for poetry. I enjoyed Aileen's poem and your deconstruction of its component parts. The poem proved to be rich in literary elements. This 'noticing' is something we must train our poet's eye and ear to do.Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-66514092974891367612019-01-25T17:01:41.524-08:002019-01-25T17:01:41.524-08:00oooooooooh! You've helped me tremendously! I&#...oooooooooh! You've helped me tremendously! I'm putting together a Poetry Brackets contest for my school and this one really fits the bill for onomatopeioa. Not only that, but this week I am studying Aileen Fisher after watching Renee LaTulippe & Lee Bennett Hopkins American Children's Poets Episode #2. I chose Aileen Fisher as my mentor for this week's writing....and this is not a poem I had or knew. Thanks!Linda Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00833034575304594924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-26673534885956257682019-01-25T11:39:25.187-08:002019-01-25T11:39:25.187-08:00Thank you, jama! Fisher's work is a treasure.Thank you, jama! Fisher's work is a treasure.Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05544279741867167860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1370341673114614855.post-24882707728583905352019-01-25T11:38:42.839-08:002019-01-25T11:38:42.839-08:00Thanks, Jone! It's nice to know I'm not al...Thanks, Jone! It's nice to know I'm not alone in my weather obssession :)Kimberly Hutmacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05544279741867167860noreply@blogger.com